Hi I am Ben and In literacy we have been working on recount writing so I did my tryathlon as my writing.
I thought this was hard because I had to change it up a couple times.
I used no sources but my BRAIN.
I used google docs.
Have you ever done a triathlon.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Ben
ReplyDeleteIts Cameron I noticed you had done a new blog post and I was intrested In what you have been doing.I like how your sporty and thought you might try the Tryathlon it good that you have a DLO.Maybe next time you could make the google doc a bigger so we can just read it also add a little more writing at the top like how good you did bye for now
Hey Ben, fantastic blog post! I loved your use of think 6 and your recount writing. I thought that you did a really good job explaining how the triathlon works, I especially liked your explanation of the transponder as a lot of people would find this useful. On your next blog post come and see a teacher or a year 6 student and we will show you how to make the DLO larger. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ben I see you have done a triathlon I have not done a triathlon before sounds like a lot of fun were you puffed after? I like how sport you must be :)
ReplyDeletei was sorta puffed
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