Welcome back bloggers, a couple of days ago we had to do a quick Wright. the picture was is lots off twisted trees and two little girls with lanterns. it was pretty hard because there was so much going on and I didnt know were to start. So this is my story.
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Hi Ben carter here
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool Ben I liked the part where you said they ran as fast as there little legs could carry them.
Hey Ben, great job on your free writing . I like the way you are challenging yourself with your descriptive writing.
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