Welcome back bloggers to another one of my posts, yesterday we had to write a little story about this picture. It was easy because there is so much going on in the picture and so many different ways to explain it. Have you ever written about this picture?? tell me in the comments, bye! 
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 27, 2021
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Fantastic writing Ben. You are right, there is a lot happening in this picture! Perhaps next time you can provide an example of personification.
ReplyDeleteFantastic job
ReplyDeleteThat is some good writing and there a lot going on in that picture. Next time you could add some similles or methpoeres. Great Job