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Friday, August 27, 2021

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Welcome back bloggers to another one of my posts, yesterday we had to write a little story about this picture. It was easy because there is so much going on in the picture and so many different ways to explain it. Have you ever written about this picture?? tell me in the comments, bye!    

2 comments:

  1. Fantastic writing Ben. You are right, there is a lot happening in this picture! Perhaps next time you can provide an example of personification.

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  2. Fantastic job
    That is some good writing and there a lot going on in that picture. Next time you could add some similles or methpoeres. Great Job

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